I
too
am exhausted
exorcised
omnivorous
oblivious to
the length and breadth
of my long illness
and the wasting away
and the tasting of spray
from the crashing waves
against shallow cliffs
the reptilian coast
where Gila
and she
have mingled.
Friday, May 04, 2007
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2 comments:
i love the raw emotion you've captured in your vivid imagery. also the word choices are excellent, liquid flowing of words culminating to a moving ending. loved it
Thanks for stopping by and for the comment Rax!
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