Monday, November 24, 2008


rose hips like cherries
powdered milk snow white landscape
punctuated red

herringbone pattern
perpetual gliding slopes
crystallized breathing


ms.e said...

wonderful visuals...well written. love the use of "herringbone pattern" and "rose hips like cherries" and... haha, it's all good.

Anonymous said...

Vivid and intense - the more so for its minimalism.

Damsel said...

deep and compact.

K.Lawson Gilbert said...

I have enjoyed perusing your blog. You are a talented poet and writer. Lots of beautiful imagery that conjures excellent visions. Thanks - I will be back. K.

GeL (Emerald Eyes) said...

lush, ripe visuals
I feel as if I can reach out and touch, this affects my senses that much.