Sunday, August 12, 2007

Etre

No snug safe harbor
no sane serendipity
to move this conversation forward
or get the grammar for “to be.”

We are shipwrecks
both
rotting on a reef
surf pounded
life boats long drifted
out to sea.

3 comments:

Saltzy said...

rotting indeed

Johnny Nickname said...

Man, this is great. Right up my alley. Nice work.

Russell Ragsdale said...

I really like how you have made the power of the ocean complete this metaphore. Great work!