tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15940124.post8075701999888951939..comments2023-05-23T11:14:32.873-04:00Comments on When I Wax: MithunaKGT (aka Cagey)http://www.blogger.com/profile/06763973309807575484noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15940124.post-30835420061891325302008-12-28T15:05:00.000-05:002008-12-28T15:05:00.000-05:00Ditto to K.'s observation. The word choice here is...Ditto to K.'s observation. The word choice here is so pleasantly intoxicating to my mind's ear. ;) Such an interesting theme for a haibun; I like it a lot -- the brimming passion here. Cheers. Have a blessed new year, dear.S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15940124.post-83790200430269184002008-12-24T00:43:00.000-05:002008-12-24T00:43:00.000-05:00K. Gilbert above beat me to the thoughts. I echo h...K. Gilbert above beat me to the thoughts. I echo hers. That's what hit me strongest from your chosen image to the excellent poem you wove- great word choices and, of course, the imagery is gloriously sharp.<BR/>I also thought it's creative that you put a bit of prose in between the verses.Gelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18126965921250934236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15940124.post-8002119328422349542008-12-19T19:32:00.000-05:002008-12-19T19:32:00.000-05:00I like the juxtaposition of the ancient and modern...I like the juxtaposition of the ancient and modern lovers, times, et.al. Very impresive poem. Beautiful use of language.K.Lawson Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11204234196229710524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15940124.post-1592015300261424062008-12-19T15:08:00.000-05:002008-12-19T15:08:00.000-05:00Amazing Joseph Campbell quote. Thank you!Amazing Joseph Campbell quote. Thank you!Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07747839768257543728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15940124.post-30365507776897157542008-12-19T14:58:00.000-05:002008-12-19T14:58:00.000-05:00The "unchanged lovers" part certainly grabs and de...The "unchanged lovers" part certainly grabs and deserves more attention. You've placed intrigue in the excavation of ancient lovers juxtaposed with a snapshot of the now.Ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05060540403361946043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15940124.post-31707408129150349712008-12-19T11:49:00.000-05:002008-12-19T11:49:00.000-05:00They should have been changed.I like this one. Bi...They should have been changed.<BR/><BR/>I like this one. Big things move under the surface.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com