tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15940124.post5963634077556943450..comments2023-05-23T11:14:32.873-04:00Comments on When I Wax: CoursingKGT (aka Cagey)http://www.blogger.com/profile/06763973309807575484noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15940124.post-83214309148372985762007-01-19T07:01:00.000-05:002007-01-19T07:01:00.000-05:00The first line made me sit straight up, on the edg...The first line made me sit straight up, on the edge of my seat. (I imagine the piercing... Oh!) ^_^ The ending, too, lends quite an impact.<br /><br /><i>She is dwindling<br />she is dwarfing</i><br /><br />You portray the image (and strengthen the message) effectively.<br /><br />Cheers.S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15940124.post-4134003011188636712007-01-08T18:25:00.000-05:002007-01-08T18:25:00.000-05:00Thanks Madame b! Come back soon...and thanks for l...Thanks Madame b! Come back soon...and thanks for letting me link to "Stripped"KGT (aka Cagey)https://www.blogger.com/profile/06763973309807575484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15940124.post-33073888248058501142007-01-06T16:41:00.000-05:002007-01-06T16:41:00.000-05:00'brooch pins for my eyes' i love the image and the...'brooch pins for my eyes' i love the image and the symbolism - will be back :)Madame Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07007723927591590306noreply@blogger.com